Wednesday, November 28, 2007

essay

PEOPLE ARE LIVING LONGER

Everyone has the same life process. Everyone is born and everyone dies. However, experiments show that nowadays human life period is increasing day to day. These days if you look around, you can easily see so many old people and they still look healthy. There are three reasons why these people are living longer than before. These three reasons include better nutrition, new medical technologies and using improve protection ways from wild life.

2 comments:

Hui Ying Yang said...

One of your sentences "These three reasons include better life conditions..."
It should be life condition.

Maggie said...

proccess=process
change the last sentence :These three reasons include better life conditions, new medical technologies, and using improves protection ways from wild life.